Post by WicKayed on Feb 17, 2004 19:54:43 GMT -5
Okay.. *deep breath* Here goes. My first Wicked fanfiction. Part One. There's definately a lot more to come, but I figured I'd put something up for people to read/give me feedback on. If you haven't seen the show yet, this fic will of course have massive Act II spoilers, so turn back now, those who haven't seen the show (uhm.. though I don't think anyone on this board fits into that category! Hehe. It was worth saying, though. )
Basically, my fanfiction tells Fiyero's story after "No Good Deed" and how he deals with Dorothy/Boq/The Lion... all with the end goal of finding Elphaba again and getting out of Oz! I'm more or less synching up stuff in "The Wizard of Oz" with "Wicked" I guess. ;D
Enjoy!
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There Are Always Two Sides
by Kelonzi (my fanfiction SN)
Sometimes a guy did stupid things for true love.
And for someone who had spent most of his life believing there was no such thing as “true love”, this was one heck of a thing to discover. Fiyero loved Elphaba- not just some idle fancy or a passionate lust after her body. He loved her. Loved her mysterious mind, her indominable spirit and, yes, even her phosphorous-colored skin.
He even found that he loved her enough to blindly charge in and face death for her.
But it had all happened so fast. It wasn’t something he had really planned out at all. When the time came, he just… knew what was right and what was wrong. Somehow, watching her being manhandled by troops formerly under his command had caused his rational brain to snap. The gun was in his hand before he rightly knew what he’d do with it. Was he willing to kill?
Yes.
“Let the green girl go!”
Aiming at Glinda. Forcing that horrible Morrible to let Elphaba go. Watching his love mount her broom and take off. His relief was beyond description, but that relief didn’t last long. With their prey freed, the guards had turned their full attention on punishing him, as part of him had figured they would.
And from there… the memories got kinda fuzzy…..
* * * * * *
As Fiyero’s eyes opened ever so slowly, he could see the sun was well above the eastern horizon. It was mid-morning, if not nearly noon. So, yes, he had somehow slept through the night. And, ha! Even better! He had managed to oversleep. If only old Dillamond could see me now. “The famous Prince Fiyero of the Winkies, once more late to class! What’s wrong, your highness? Has a previous appointment with the wild Pillow People detained you from your studies?!” He’d have me on report to the Dean of Shiz before I could say, “Detentionation.”
Though what Fiyero had gone through in the last 12 hours could hardly qualify as sleeping. Being hung in midair from a pole as punishment for associating with “The Wicked Witch of the West” didn’t quite translate to a restful night. Anyone with half a brain could figure that out.
The worst part of all, though were the dreams. Nightmares, more like it. Horrible, gut-wrenching swirls of images. He relived feeling the blows of each soldier, in turn, ripping his flesh open with relish… the warm blood running down his limbs, itching maddeningly… it was like being set on a spit to roast over an open fire, basting in his own juices.
But just when he knew he couldn’t take it any longer, it had all stopped. No pain. As if he was suddenly filled with cotton-- or the very air itself. And, though the dream ended there, in his mind’s eye he could still see the frustrated looks on the faces of the soldiers as their brutal attacks landed harmlessly. He chuckled happily at the memory. Though Fiyero felt no pain, he did feel the satisfaction of seeing his enemies’ weapons rendered useless. If this was what it felt like to die, he didn’t mind death nearly as much as he had always feared he would. Not as easy as you thought it would be, eh? Come on. Who wants another shot?! You thought your little trap would succeed and kill both me and the “Wicked Witch”—
Elphaba. He stopped laughing as quickly as he had started. He had no time to dwell on these dream images. Basking in their merry glow was only eating up his precious time- time which he couldn’t afford to loose. Blinking repeatedly to clear his vision, he began taking in his surroundings. If he was going to be of any use to Elphie, he had to get his bearings and then get the Oz out of here.
Fiyero’s “prison” was one of the dozens of cornfields spread throughout Oz. If he were to be any judge, he would guess his location to be somewhere outside of Munchkinland. He knew the yellow brick road, which arched off to either side of him, to be far less busy in the suburbs. If he wanted to get back to his family’s castle, Kiamo Ko, (which he had loaned to Elphaba for her protection) he’d have to go west- the branch of the road which lay off to his right. To his left was the route to the Emerald City- and that was the last place he wanted to go right now. He was as much a fugitive as Elphaba now.
So, to the right it was. But how to get down? That pole the guards had pinned him against was still there, rammed roughly up his back.
“Wonderful.” Lips cracked and dry, he attempted to moisten them again with his tongue. “What--?” He repeated the motion, but found the gesture had no effect. Again. Nothing. Dry as sand… or a burlap sack… What exactly had those soldiers done to him? The last time he had been this dry in the mouth had been after a rather eventful night at the Ozdust Ballroom involving some pretty freshman girls and a keg of Wizard’s Own Brew.
Turning his head to either side, Fiyero observed his arms laying prone on the crossbeam, in a classic crucifixion pose. He looked down to his feet, catching sight of the pants to his old Palace Guard uniform which he still wore. They were very worn- moreso than he remembered them being- not to mention patched and torn in several places. Out of the tears sprouted bits of—what was that? Dried grass? Great. He really did look a sight, then. The wild man/escaped prisoner look certainly wasn’t tops in Ozmo magazine- unless you were reading the fashion Faux Pas column.
Bending his right wrist around at an entirely unnatural angle, he wiggled it free of the rope that had bound him to the pole. A second quick manuver and he had his left wrist freed as well. Though it registered briefly in Fiyero’s mind that his bones shouldn’t have been able to bend like that, his newfound freedom pleased him beyond caring. Raising a leg to hand level, he began trying to brush away the mess. But no matter how hard he tried, it simply wouldn’t—
N-no way. He reached up anxiously to pat his hair down, but was met with more of that dried grass and a hat that he didn’t have any recollection of putting on.
“Oh for the love of Oz…” It hit him instantly as he surveyed the rest of his body and touched his face. He closed his eyes and shook his head in a strange mix of horror and resigned frustration. She’d certainly saved him from a messy death, but now he was… he was…
“Let his flesh not be torn… let his blood leave no stain… though they beat him, let him feel no pain…”
You’ve really gotta learn how to use that blasted book, Fae.
* * * * * *
The incompetency of some people was truly astonishing, Boq thought to himself as he moved jerkily through the woods. He’d seize up long before he got to his cabin at this rate. And all thanks to those overzealous witch hunters. One little demonstration with buckets of water and a manequin designed to look like that green menace Elphaba shouldn’t have been such a hazard to his health… and up until a few days ago it wouldn’t have been.
Accidentally splashed water rolled pleasantly off human skin. However, to a man made of tin, water posed a much larger problem.
The offending water-tosser had appologised profusely and offered to locate some joint lubriant for Boq, but he had refused her. He still had something resembling pride left. It was hard enough already to show himself in public without also revealing his new achilles’ heel to the crowd. Boq knew he had an oil can laying around the woods somewhere. He just had to find it before his joints rusted up for good.
But fate seemed to be conspiring against him as he trekked homeward. Not only was his forest cabin along a rather remote part of Oz’s famed yellow brick road, but it looked like a storm was brewing. If he didn’t get to his oil in time it would be days, if not weeks, until another living soul passed by. Which was a staggeringly long time to go without moving.
No, he wasn’t going to let this happen to him. He had things to do. Wicked witches to witness getting their just deserts. But where in the name of Oz is my—
There! It was on a stump just off the road, near the tree he had stuck his axe in before leaving for the witching rally at the Emerald City. With one last great effort, he yanked the axe free and turned to grab the oil can—
Almost… almost there…
Basically, my fanfiction tells Fiyero's story after "No Good Deed" and how he deals with Dorothy/Boq/The Lion... all with the end goal of finding Elphaba again and getting out of Oz! I'm more or less synching up stuff in "The Wizard of Oz" with "Wicked" I guess. ;D
Enjoy!
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There Are Always Two Sides
by Kelonzi (my fanfiction SN)
Sometimes a guy did stupid things for true love.
And for someone who had spent most of his life believing there was no such thing as “true love”, this was one heck of a thing to discover. Fiyero loved Elphaba- not just some idle fancy or a passionate lust after her body. He loved her. Loved her mysterious mind, her indominable spirit and, yes, even her phosphorous-colored skin.
He even found that he loved her enough to blindly charge in and face death for her.
But it had all happened so fast. It wasn’t something he had really planned out at all. When the time came, he just… knew what was right and what was wrong. Somehow, watching her being manhandled by troops formerly under his command had caused his rational brain to snap. The gun was in his hand before he rightly knew what he’d do with it. Was he willing to kill?
Yes.
“Let the green girl go!”
Aiming at Glinda. Forcing that horrible Morrible to let Elphaba go. Watching his love mount her broom and take off. His relief was beyond description, but that relief didn’t last long. With their prey freed, the guards had turned their full attention on punishing him, as part of him had figured they would.
And from there… the memories got kinda fuzzy…..
* * * * * *
As Fiyero’s eyes opened ever so slowly, he could see the sun was well above the eastern horizon. It was mid-morning, if not nearly noon. So, yes, he had somehow slept through the night. And, ha! Even better! He had managed to oversleep. If only old Dillamond could see me now. “The famous Prince Fiyero of the Winkies, once more late to class! What’s wrong, your highness? Has a previous appointment with the wild Pillow People detained you from your studies?!” He’d have me on report to the Dean of Shiz before I could say, “Detentionation.”
Though what Fiyero had gone through in the last 12 hours could hardly qualify as sleeping. Being hung in midair from a pole as punishment for associating with “The Wicked Witch of the West” didn’t quite translate to a restful night. Anyone with half a brain could figure that out.
The worst part of all, though were the dreams. Nightmares, more like it. Horrible, gut-wrenching swirls of images. He relived feeling the blows of each soldier, in turn, ripping his flesh open with relish… the warm blood running down his limbs, itching maddeningly… it was like being set on a spit to roast over an open fire, basting in his own juices.
But just when he knew he couldn’t take it any longer, it had all stopped. No pain. As if he was suddenly filled with cotton-- or the very air itself. And, though the dream ended there, in his mind’s eye he could still see the frustrated looks on the faces of the soldiers as their brutal attacks landed harmlessly. He chuckled happily at the memory. Though Fiyero felt no pain, he did feel the satisfaction of seeing his enemies’ weapons rendered useless. If this was what it felt like to die, he didn’t mind death nearly as much as he had always feared he would. Not as easy as you thought it would be, eh? Come on. Who wants another shot?! You thought your little trap would succeed and kill both me and the “Wicked Witch”—
Elphaba. He stopped laughing as quickly as he had started. He had no time to dwell on these dream images. Basking in their merry glow was only eating up his precious time- time which he couldn’t afford to loose. Blinking repeatedly to clear his vision, he began taking in his surroundings. If he was going to be of any use to Elphie, he had to get his bearings and then get the Oz out of here.
Fiyero’s “prison” was one of the dozens of cornfields spread throughout Oz. If he were to be any judge, he would guess his location to be somewhere outside of Munchkinland. He knew the yellow brick road, which arched off to either side of him, to be far less busy in the suburbs. If he wanted to get back to his family’s castle, Kiamo Ko, (which he had loaned to Elphaba for her protection) he’d have to go west- the branch of the road which lay off to his right. To his left was the route to the Emerald City- and that was the last place he wanted to go right now. He was as much a fugitive as Elphaba now.
So, to the right it was. But how to get down? That pole the guards had pinned him against was still there, rammed roughly up his back.
“Wonderful.” Lips cracked and dry, he attempted to moisten them again with his tongue. “What--?” He repeated the motion, but found the gesture had no effect. Again. Nothing. Dry as sand… or a burlap sack… What exactly had those soldiers done to him? The last time he had been this dry in the mouth had been after a rather eventful night at the Ozdust Ballroom involving some pretty freshman girls and a keg of Wizard’s Own Brew.
Turning his head to either side, Fiyero observed his arms laying prone on the crossbeam, in a classic crucifixion pose. He looked down to his feet, catching sight of the pants to his old Palace Guard uniform which he still wore. They were very worn- moreso than he remembered them being- not to mention patched and torn in several places. Out of the tears sprouted bits of—what was that? Dried grass? Great. He really did look a sight, then. The wild man/escaped prisoner look certainly wasn’t tops in Ozmo magazine- unless you were reading the fashion Faux Pas column.
Bending his right wrist around at an entirely unnatural angle, he wiggled it free of the rope that had bound him to the pole. A second quick manuver and he had his left wrist freed as well. Though it registered briefly in Fiyero’s mind that his bones shouldn’t have been able to bend like that, his newfound freedom pleased him beyond caring. Raising a leg to hand level, he began trying to brush away the mess. But no matter how hard he tried, it simply wouldn’t—
N-no way. He reached up anxiously to pat his hair down, but was met with more of that dried grass and a hat that he didn’t have any recollection of putting on.
“Oh for the love of Oz…” It hit him instantly as he surveyed the rest of his body and touched his face. He closed his eyes and shook his head in a strange mix of horror and resigned frustration. She’d certainly saved him from a messy death, but now he was… he was…
“Let his flesh not be torn… let his blood leave no stain… though they beat him, let him feel no pain…”
You’ve really gotta learn how to use that blasted book, Fae.
* * * * * *
The incompetency of some people was truly astonishing, Boq thought to himself as he moved jerkily through the woods. He’d seize up long before he got to his cabin at this rate. And all thanks to those overzealous witch hunters. One little demonstration with buckets of water and a manequin designed to look like that green menace Elphaba shouldn’t have been such a hazard to his health… and up until a few days ago it wouldn’t have been.
Accidentally splashed water rolled pleasantly off human skin. However, to a man made of tin, water posed a much larger problem.
The offending water-tosser had appologised profusely and offered to locate some joint lubriant for Boq, but he had refused her. He still had something resembling pride left. It was hard enough already to show himself in public without also revealing his new achilles’ heel to the crowd. Boq knew he had an oil can laying around the woods somewhere. He just had to find it before his joints rusted up for good.
But fate seemed to be conspiring against him as he trekked homeward. Not only was his forest cabin along a rather remote part of Oz’s famed yellow brick road, but it looked like a storm was brewing. If he didn’t get to his oil in time it would be days, if not weeks, until another living soul passed by. Which was a staggeringly long time to go without moving.
No, he wasn’t going to let this happen to him. He had things to do. Wicked witches to witness getting their just deserts. But where in the name of Oz is my—
There! It was on a stump just off the road, near the tree he had stuck his axe in before leaving for the witching rally at the Emerald City. With one last great effort, he yanked the axe free and turned to grab the oil can—
Almost… almost there…