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Post by imperfectly_green on May 16, 2005 15:25:06 GMT -5
I'm guessing high-jinks and conflict ensue because of this Amirio/Desmona complication, but eventually everything gets straightened out, the boy(s) get(s) the girl(s), and the kids all help to save the world. I agree, this would seem to be the most plausible course of action. Of course, GG and DE could decide to add a dramatic plot twist of some sort, and someone could die or something, but that doesn't seem likely. I also think Boq could be redeemed. Another thing, though...what about Fiyero? I mean, they just left him and it would be interesting to hear his reactions. But if you could find some way to-I don't know-change him back...uh, because Ali has only seen her father as a scarecrow and...that would be interesting too, if you did that. I can't imagine that it's pleasant to live as a scarecrow. But that's life, I guess. |
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Post by galindafiedgirl215 on May 16, 2005 17:12:48 GMT -5
*jumps up and down on manuscript* FIYERO IS STAYING A SCARECROW! I have gotten a bazillion things saying turn him back coughDE'SMOMcough and he is staying scarecrow! Okay I feel better now lol Just that seems so cliche' to me. DE might kill me for posting this but oh well. BTW I am not trying to insult anyone's ideas here. Forgive me if it appears that way.
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Post by imperfectly_green on May 16, 2005 17:44:05 GMT -5
No, no, that's okay, really. I was just thinking of what could happen, Ali's reaction, Elphie's reaction, everyone else's reactions, etc., if he did change back. *Head floods with inappropriate ideas.* Darn subconcious, I didn't mean that. No, I didn't! Argh! Stop it! Anyway, you are the authors, you call the shots. I didn't mean to insult any of your ideas, either. It is a little cliche. I happen to be a sucker for cliche, though. ;D
P.S. Sorry, the inappropriateness was unnecessary.
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Post by galindafiedgirl215 on May 16, 2005 19:51:43 GMT -5
It doesn't bother me any lol But anyways who knows what will happen? I mean I wouldn't MIND him being human, but I want this fan fic to be diffrent. And you didn't hurt my feelings a bit!
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Post by GreenGirl285 on May 18, 2005 17:16:50 GMT -5
OMG this story is amazing! You have some real talent there. And congrats on getting the job on the newspaper. I know this happenend a while ago but I just started reading this. Keep up the good work and I can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!
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Post by I Will Be Popular on May 18, 2005 20:05:57 GMT -5
Wow. I am speechless. You have serious expertice. The last addition to the story kept me on the edge of my seat the entire time. Please, ad another WONDERFUL addition to this story soon! Here's my impression of Desamona:  |
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Post by DancingElphie on May 23, 2005 17:31:50 GMT -5
Wow! That doll is almost how I pictured Desmona! Scary! Very cool though! I really like it!
DE
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Post by galindafiedgirl215 on May 23, 2005 17:48:42 GMT -5
Very good work! Lol anybody up formaking a Blaise and Amirio doll? And work is underway for the next chapter, I am pleased to report. Thanks for all the great reviews! And glad to see we have new readers! Nice to meet you all!
Rachel
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Post by I Will Be Popular on May 23, 2005 18:56:24 GMT -5
thanks!  i really enjoy making dolls and i love this story... so I decided to make a Desamona doll! lol she is a very interesting character. Here's my impression of Ali:  (gotta luv those boots!) |
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Post by galindafiedgirl215 on May 24, 2005 10:01:35 GMT -5
That's really really good!
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Post by I Will Be Popular on May 24, 2005 15:44:56 GMT -5
thanks! i like to think of it as swakified lol |
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Post by galindafiedgirl215 on May 27, 2005 15:51:54 GMT -5
Hey guys! DE and I have just made a website for our fan fiction, both together and seperatly. MAJOR props go to DE on this project. She did all the HTML work and designing. It looks great! So anyways if you guys get the time check it out! Thanks! GG www.livejournal.com/~fae_n_ali/ |
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Post by imperfectly_green on May 27, 2005 18:38:29 GMT -5
Amazing, guys! ;D Yay for Breaking Through the Night! Yay for DE's fic! Yay for...I should probably stop. But your new site...awesome idea.
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Post by DancingElphie on May 27, 2005 21:00:52 GMT -5
Oh yeah. I always forgot to post it here. I wrote it a few months ago. But yeah. I rather like it. Everybody- do you like the layout? Is it looking right (the sidebar should be on the left, the header centered over the entries)? Should something be added? I want imput please!  DE |
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Post by I Will Be Popular on May 28, 2005 13:36:07 GMT -5
it's amazing! wow...
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i really enjoy making dolls and i love this story... so I decided to make a Desamona doll! lol she is a very interesting character. Here's my impression of Ali: