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Post by Canged_For_The_Better on Feb 15, 2005 0:18:17 GMT -5
It's kinda a song parody to the tune to "I'm Not That Girl" not excatly about me having a boyfriend or anthing, but about the girl I used to be and.......well, just read it.
Blushing cheeks, innocent smile. Shy little voice, and sweet intentions. Optomistic and kind always, That may be who I was, But it's not who I am Don't rember, not now. It just makes me feel guilty and dirty, Don't remeber how everyone used to love you, That may be who I was, But it's not who I am. Every so often I wish to go back to way I was, But it stopps right when some little thing gets me mad and reality sets back in. Additude problems, rebblious always, That's truly who I become, Insulting words and hurting people, That's who i've become, And Heaven knows, that's not who I was. Don't wish or worry, Wishing and worrying only makes you deppresed, I wasn't born for kindness or sweetness. There's this girl I know, loved she was, I'm no longer that girl.
I know the ryming stunk, but, I wasn't paying much attention to the ryming. ;D
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Post by GoodWitchGlinda on Feb 21, 2005 17:19:21 GMT -5
Are you kidding? That was really good!!!! ;D
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Post by karatekid on May 28, 2005 7:34:35 GMT -5
Nice job! I really liked how you compared your past and present self, and used lots of contradicting adjectives!
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