DancingElphie
Sorceress-In-Training
Hands touch, eyes meet. Sudden silence, sudden heat...
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Post by DancingElphie on Jun 13, 2005 19:08:42 GMT -5
Lovely long chapter (sorry i ddin't respond: been EXTREMELY busy). YOu did a great job with the insight, and I'm a tough critic on that (mainly because it's my favorite part to write). Definatly use the time span to come up with some new stuff: maybe some stuff involving Boq and Nessa or something? A new character? I want a mini plot! Great job, and I like my Fiyeraba too, so I want to see more detail on why Elphie thinks she might be in love (that's somethign slightly wrong with the musical if you ask me: it doesn't set them up very well). Wondeful job, imperfectly! And I still want this on FF.net! www.fanfiction.net It's the greatest site ever, trust me. We need more good Wicked fics! Me and GG's is posted there, along with all of Twisted (known as Aerohead on there), and a spectacular book based one called Night Angel Grounded (it's long, but the author hasn't finished it!). Anyways, post it there! DE
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Post by ~Wind Phoenix~ on Jun 16, 2005 11:06:54 GMT -5
Very lovely.. Err... Don't really know what to say as it has already been said... One suggestion. Use time between major events in the musical for deviating (right word?) away from it. That way you can use your imagination more, and it makes it more interesting. Did that make sense? ~Wp
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Post by imperfectly_green on Jun 29, 2005 19:25:35 GMT -5
Wow, I get an e-mail break in class. How cool is that (and no, I'm not at summer school)?
Anyway, I'm sorry I haven't written for so long, but I have limited computer access and very little access to Microsoft Word. I'l try to post when I can type up an entry in my free time, but that might take awhile. Just bear with me, as summer is a very busy time for me.
Thanks for your patience,
~Dee
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Post by emeraldroad on Jun 30, 2005 12:38:28 GMT -5
Hope you post again soon!!
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DancingElphie
Sorceress-In-Training
Hands touch, eyes meet. Sudden silence, sudden heat...
Posts: 198
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Post by DancingElphie on Jun 30, 2005 13:44:06 GMT -5
Good luck Imperfectly! Cant' wait till the next entry, but take your time. You're patient with us when we take a while, I must be patient with you. DE
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Post by imperfectly_green on Jul 4, 2005 13:32:25 GMT -5
Thanks guys. ;D
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DancingElphie
Sorceress-In-Training
Hands touch, eyes meet. Sudden silence, sudden heat...
Posts: 198
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Post by DancingElphie on Oct 5, 2005 20:33:24 GMT -5
I'm bumping this so all those new people can read this wonderful fic. And as a small little reminder to a favorite author of mine. YAY FOR ELPHABA'S DIARY!
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Post by imperfectly_green on Oct 9, 2005 14:41:55 GMT -5
"A favorite?!" I'm a favorite?! I'm flattered!! Thank you so much for the boost. Anyway, I apologize for not updating for a really long time, but it seems like I'm trying to write and all that comes out of my fingertips is mush. It must be that it's the beginning of the school year or something. I'll try to get something up soon, but I want the new chapter to have the same flavor as the old ones, and right now it's about as colorful as cement. Thanks to DE and the rest of you who have been so wonderful in your patience, imperfectly
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Post by imperfectly_green on Nov 14, 2005 18:26:19 GMT -5
I just glanced at the clock. Two in the morning. Whoever decides to pen their life story in an overly detailed sappy teen-drama sort of way like I’m about to do can only be writing at two in the morning. But I guess that’s the point of keeping a diary in the first place, to be able to say things you could never say otherwise, to reveal a person in these pages that no one else can know. I’m afraid I do turn a bit romantic and silly in the wee hours of the morning, despite my “better,” more cynical judgment. But the fact that I’m writing to a reader I invented when I was a much lonelier person, not so long ago, should exempt me from having to explain myself. The fact that I’m doing so is further proof that I’m only half-awake, and can be excused from whatever nonsense I happen to scribble next.
On another note, it’s a miracle Glinda hasn’t woken up yet.Just reminding myself to write another entry. If I keep working, I might actually get it done.
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DancingElphie
Sorceress-In-Training
Hands touch, eyes meet. Sudden silence, sudden heat...
Posts: 198
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Post by DancingElphie on Nov 16, 2005 22:15:29 GMT -5
YAY FOR NEW DIARY ENTRIES....
I'll calm down now. Elphaba is still perfectly in character. I can't wati to see what you've bot up your sleve.
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Post by imperfectly_green on Nov 20, 2005 21:52:49 GMT -5
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Post by karatekid on Feb 5, 2006 13:16:54 GMT -5
YAY FOR NEW DIARY ENTRIES.... I'll calm down now. Elphaba is still perfectly in character. I can't wati to see what you've bot up your sleve. I agree w/DE. PLEASE UPDATE, but take your time!
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