Charmed

[stars in the sky]

Whoa. I totally expected a story titled after a blechy-looking TV show to be of equal taste, but WOW. This is awesome! I can't wait to see what's going to happen!

[galindafiedgirl215]

O......................M...................GOSH! That was a WONDERFUL story! See, imperfectly, I told you you could do it! Didn't I tell ya? Okay enough with the wicked line, but that was REALLY a great story and I can't wait to see what happens next!!

<3 GG

[Yackle]

What a wonderful beginning! I'm intrigued with the premise and can't wait to see where you take them. And as long as Elphaba and Fiyero are together I'm happy.

I admit when "the boy" started to speak I was afraid it was going to be Liir.

Keep going. SOON PLEASE!!

[imperfectly_green]

stars said:

Whoa. I totally expected a story titled after a blechy-looking TV show to be of equal taste, but WOW. This is awesome! I can't wait to see what's going to happen!

Actually, I didn't know it was a TV show until I saw the book adaption of the show in Barnes & Noble. Then I was afraid I would have to change the name, but I was too attached to let go. Just goes to show that you can't judge a story by its...um...title!

[DancingElphie]

Really, REALLY well done. A very well written style, with lots of intruige, a good portion of new characters (vital to any fic, at least I think so). I really like your style (use of similies and such), and a very intruging plot. You definatly have a great base here. I can't wait to see what you come up with next. I'll definatly be waiting!
DE

[Twisted]

Very interesting; I'd like to see where this goes, but it's caught my interest.

[ClumsyDude15]

Nice... love the idea... keep it going.

[imperfectly_green]

clumsydude15 said:

Nice...love the idea...keep it going.

Should I really keep it going? And what idea is that? I haven't even introduced most of the plot yet...but if you guys think I should keep it going...

[stars in the sky]

::raises hand::

Definitely go on!

[stars in the sky]

I am intrigued and must reread this...although the idea of a WoO-themed mansion cracks me up

I will say this, though: perhaps the characters should be a bit older than seventh grade?

Also, though you've been fine so far, just be careful about doing a Wicked-set-in-our-modern-world spin.

[imperfectly_green]

Hey all,

I just wanted to say that I deleted the story. I didn't feel that it was best to post it in the first place, so I took I off. I still have it, but I'm sticking to writing it for my own entertainment and not to share with others. It was too strange. Thanks for your patience,

~Dee

If you want to see another story, though, I'm starting one now, Elphaba's Diary. Normal subject material, I promise. Also, read DE and GG's fic, found in '"Fan Fiction Test!" Thanks, and enjoy.

[DancingElphie]

Hey thanks for the boost. We appriciate it! But sorry you deleted it. Those last two chapters weren't my cup of tea really, but I LOVE the prologue. It's tone and mood was incredible. i've never read anything like it.
DE

[imperfectly_green]

dancingelphie said:

Hey thanks for the boost. We appriciate it! But sorry you deleted it. Those last two chapters weren't my cup of tea really, but I LOVE the prologue. It's tone and mood was incredible. i've never read anything like it.
DE

Thanks! The prologue, actually, was my favorite part. I always thought it was a little risky posting the rest, because I was targeting a very small audience (*coughcoughmysistercoughcough*)in my original plan for the story. But I discovered Verdi, and thought "Aww, what the heck, I'll just post it." However, I might use the prologue in something else, if I get around to it.